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    moments

    this is one poem alot of people liked so im sharing it with you here on this site

    *moments*
    i wish i could stay in moments like this
    where i know im loved, where i am kissed
    these moments make good memories, these moments are my high points
    i just want to stay in them forever
    the moments with freinds the moments with family, i wish they never went away

    moments... that is what i love, moments that i see and live with.
    the moments i get to spend on here talking to you all
    these moments are the most precious of all.
    these are the moments that make me want to live near you all, and yet im here in my place of he11

    these moments that i see are what keep me going, so promise me one thing
    lets make more together
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    Re: moments

    I like this one, but it has one small flaw. I know the title of the poem is called Moments...but the use of the word too much becomes redundant and dull. You could have substituted some other words in for it. But all in all, quite good. ^_^
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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    Re: moments

    hmmm your right, i should have but no one said anything about it, thanks for the critz.
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    Re: moments

    i love this one because moments are one of a kind
    you dont get but one and you should cherish it good or bad
    because a moment defines who we are and knowing that
    makes every moment specail.

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    Re: moments

    hey thanks! and your right moments are what define us. i can see im going to love being here already.
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