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Jan 26, 2007, 07:00 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: brimstone graveyard
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 Credits: 362 | moments this is one poem alot of people liked so im sharing it with you here on this site *moments* i wish i could stay in moments like this where i know im loved, where i am kissed these moments make good memories, these moments are my high points i just want to stay in them forever the moments with freinds the moments with family, i wish they never went away moments... that is what i love, moments that i see and live with. the moments i get to spend on here talking to you all these moments are the most precious of all. these are the moments that make me want to live near you all, and yet im here in my place of he11 these moments that i see are what keep me going, so promise me one thing lets make more together
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Jan 26, 2007, 07:55 AM
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| Demon Loving Only Himself  Join Date: May 2006 Location: I dislike stalkers.
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Credits: 1,006 | Re: moments I like this one, but it has one small flaw. I know the title of the poem is called Moments...but the use of the word too much becomes redundant and dull. You could have substituted some other words in for it. But all in all, quite good. ^_^
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Jan 26, 2007, 07:56 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: brimstone graveyard
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Credits: 362 | Re: moments hmmm your right, i should have but no one said anything about it, thanks for the critz.
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Jan 26, 2007, 08:10 AM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 3,212 | Re: moments i love this one because moments are one of a kind you dont get but one and you should cherish it good or bad because a moment defines who we are and knowing that makes every moment specail. |
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Jan 26, 2007, 08:23 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: brimstone graveyard
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Credits: 362 | Re: moments hey thanks! and your right moments are what define us. i can see im going to love being here already.
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