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    Moments Aagain!

    Everything has moment and every
    moment has a thing no matter how you
    see it things will never be the same ,you
    can deny it all you want but once the
    moment comes all you can do is watch.

    A man walks off the cliff thinking how
    life sucks and right before he meets
    the ground he realises he forgot to
    leave a note telling everyone good bye,
    then he dies as his body hits the ground.

    Everything has a moment ,some just realise it
    to late life can be funny like that some times
    cruel , but that's what makes a moment your own
    nothing really matters as you go down the path you
    choose just as long as you know the path is right for you.

    A woman thinks her guy is cheating on her because of the late
    nights and the way he acts oddly around her so she decides to
    have one night for her self as her guy comes home with a gift
    that he had been working late nights to earn money for
    and finds her with another and he just walks away and drops her
    gift to the floor .

    Moments are choices and choices are things that some think
    are right they never question what they do its only the last
    second of the moment that most will ever remember that takes
    them down the path they choose, when your moment comes
    what will you do?

    this is another poem about moments becuase of how life can really
    be affected by them where the moment leads you is your choice
    no one can make that choice for you, moments are what make us
    who we are like i said before but they also make us do the wrong
    thing sometimes thinking its the right thing to do when it isnt
    comments and sugestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Moments Aagain!

    This was a cool poem and I could picture both the moments you mentioned. I can just imagine free falling from a cliff then going "oh crap..." But anyway, I like your poetry style, it's different and it's neat. Keep doing stuff like this.
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    Re: Moments Aagain!

    That was a very good poem. It really makes you think of how sometimes even the simplest moments that happens in life are often missed or ignored. Keep up the awesome job you're doing and I look forward to reading more.
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