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    Monsoon


    Monsoon



    Into the sunlight I am born,
    The moon sets as I lay and mourn.

    My tears fall like a morning glaze,
    Ever changing I hold this phase.

    Emotions blow strongly and true,
    Reflections in the tide for you.

    Meanings are lost through translation...

    ...yet my love for you is far from hesitation.


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    Re: Monsoon

    This had better have nothing to do with Tokio Hotel, Soldat.

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    Re: Monsoon

    Very nice, I think you should have made it longer though .

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    Re: Monsoon

    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life View Post

    Monsoon




    My tears fall like a morning glaze,
    Ever changing I hold this phase.

    Meanings are lost through translation...

    ...yet my love for you is far from hesitation.

    The use of contrast is so interesting. Hard to imagine how this sparked such a unique poem.

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    Re: Monsoon

    @Artistic Anarchy: Inspiration doesn't always come in short order, so I write what comes to mind and with the amount of time I have to let my imagination run wild :P

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    The use of contrast is so interesting. Hard to imagine how this sparked such a unique poem.
    Blame me listening to Monsoon from Tokio Hotel on repeat in English and German for 30 minutes. I joined a forum based from the music group and I felt like giving them a taste of my poetry and all ^^



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    This had better have nothing to do with Tokio Hotel, Soldat.
    ...........hai!

    .......*runs off to hide in a dark dark corner where fingers don't get pierced by nails and Hassun's out on the run with Gorecreeps*








    And yes, there are a LOT of girls under aged that welcomed me and seem to like very much my poetry and no I didn't go there just to hog all of them for myself with poetry and long posts
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    Re: Monsoon

    Ah so you are using your poetry skills to get under aged girls, very nice. It's a nice little romantic poem.

    Signature is a Gwenibe original.

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    Re: Monsoon

    Why do people misunderstand? I went there to find inspiration and meaning to my life. That and try to get active again on AO, forcing myself to relive what it was like to be new somewhere and well, poetry has always been my way of expression for the past 8 years.

    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand, zev, you should comment on my poetry and not just on the comments of my poetry.
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    Re: Monsoon

    I just warned him about his pedophiliac tendencies not too long ago too...

    Don't just discard my advice, Soldat.

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