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    i feel a chill, its flesh rubbing against mine.
    its horrible power brings me pain.
    i feel as if its impatient of time.
    if it didnt kill, hurt and was tamed.
    then i found its not all that bad.
    i see the bright side to things.
    then i remember the pain i had.
    everything that happened to me rings.
    its released, the moster within.
    full of anger, hatered, and born to kill.
    then i feel my power coming in.
    im stronger then i remeber, im not staying still.
    taking action, its gone and about time.
    still i feel a chill like winter rain.
    i feel a chill, its flesh rubbing against mine.
    its horrible power brings me pain.

    its not that good but i didnt have the exact poem with me
    lol i did this during my buisness tec class HOPIE YOU LIKIE


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    Re: Monster Within

    wow i really like the poem it had a lot of feeling to it, you really expressed the monster with in.
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    Re: Monster Within

    the only good thing about this poem is the first line: i feel a chill, its flesh rubbing against mine.

    I love the personification.
    Seduced by Flesh


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