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Reply With Quotewow very nice poem im dissapointed you still havent gone to rhyming poems but you know its still very good
Moon shining brightly over the empty streets
Single footsteps echoing between the sound houses
A late night bus scrolling over the corner
And a lonely poet sitting over by her window
Gasping for fresh air
Dreaming of someone
Singing an ode to the moon
A lovely old couple leaving their friends, going over the street- home
Big city lights making the night seem as day
Sounds of sirens so far away they seem unreal
And a lonely poet watching the passing by hours
Planes flying over one after another
High chimneys of similar houses, casting smoke in the air
A cyclist passing Your way slowly
And a poet, the only one smiling about the lovely evening
Green trees and lovely gardens to please the eye
An old man walking his little dog
Silence so peaceful it makes You cry
And a poet trying to catch the moment on a piece of paper
wow very nice poem im dissapointed you still havent gone to rhyming poems but you know its still very good
wow...brialiantly done....the atmosphere to this poem was very calm, yet sad and lonely... :/ one of ur best poem this is....i love this 1...good job ^^
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I must say this is very good,
but I agree with Levitatinganimelover, I to am dissapointed that this is not a rhyming poem but good non the less
WOW....i have no more words alot of emotions and writing i mean like oh my gosh keep it ↑ lasu
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wow...to me that was very beautiful. it was just so peaceful. i loved it!! =)
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Thank You guys!!!!!!!! ^^ I'm glad you all liked it...
And I have been writing rhying poems too lately, but this is one of the poems inspired by a moment and I prefere to make those simple, so I could put all I feel in it ^^
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Well I have to say, Im impressed with your ability to make a smooth poem, full of rythm... That DOESNT rhyme. And your work has something that is hard to pack into the "prison" that rhyming can often create... Thats imagery. Not that you can't have both... But it is much easier to describe an environment without being chained to rhyming words. You have done so perfectly here... And also filled your reader with much emotion.
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