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the sun shines bright as the moon shines brighter in the darness,
it lights the path down the path you choose,
its dark and cold but dont b afriad fr the light will always win,
lights love darkness is hatred,
love it wat u want hatred is everything else,
needing it,
wanting it,
u finally get it
ahhhhh Im not that good but please leave what ya wont i hope ya liked it
Hmmm more work needed on that man... dont feel complete with that... the start is good and slowly it goes ...eeh... naah~.. :p u know.. ^^
and please... the spelling and the grammar ^^
T.T i told u T.T i cant do those i wish i could but ill try more and thanks X_X and ull see more soon^^
Needs work on spelling other important things for a successful poem. :3
i new i shouldent have done this T.T im never good at this stuff but i i i give up X_X