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    ''Moon,sun far from the earth''





    Evry time when theres danger or fear
    the moon starts to drop tears
    and a shiny rain falls down to the earth
    as a call for company
    a friend
    They are so far from each other
    Earth circles while the moon follows
    like it were its father
    Warming sights
    made by the sun
    only seen from the far earth's sky
    beutifull lights pass through the swallow moon
    As the earth shines through the yellow full moon
    even if there so far from eachother
    they can share and help eachother through
    the silent universe



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: ''Moon,sun far from the earth''

    interesting... i didn't intirely follow it and i had to misspronounce the words to make it rhyme.

    edit:add: whoops 4got to say that it was still good.
    Last edited by fayt lingod; Aug 07, 2006 at 04:34 PM.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    Re: ''Moon,sun far from the earth''

    Not bad.... I hope you can share your poems with us again....
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: ''Moon,sun far from the earth''

    i liked it- a little hard to follow, but very good
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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