Baal

Evry time when theres danger or fear
the moon starts to drop tears
and a shiny rain falls down to the earth
as a call for company
a friend
They are so far from each other
Earth circles while the moon follows
like it were its father
Warming sights
made by the sun
only seen from the far earth's sky
beutifull lights pass through the swallow moon
As the earth shines through the yellow full moon
even if there so far from eachother
they can share and help eachother through
the silent universe

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perdoname michelle!

fayt lingod

interesting... i didn't intirely follow it and i had to misspronounce the words to make it rhyme.

edit:add: whoops 4got to say that it was still good.

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Adarrah

Not bad.... I hope you can share your poems with us again....

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Carve an amble now,
Saying that the day's still bright,
And let's play with time.

forever a dreamer

i liked it- a little hard to follow, but very good

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