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    Moonlight Confession

    ]"Moonlight Confession"

    You commited a crime,So I guess you gotta face the music
    You are charged with stealing,Stealing my heart that night
    Under the moonlight,You confessed to me
    You said that you love me,As we stood under the stars...

    "Starlight dancin"

    I couldn't believe my ears,Was I dreaming?
    You took my hand softly into your's,And kissed it
    I can't be dreaming,This seems to real
    Dream or makebelieve,I'm gonna go with what i'm feeling...

    "Soft kisses"

    I'm beginin to believe,That maybe this isn't a dream
    But a fantasy come true,Or could I be wrong?
    God forbid that be it,I wish for the opposite outcome
    I just wanna see this through,I wanna believe that dreams can come true!..

    "Fantasy into reality"

    I don't wanna have mixed emotions,But how can I tell if this is real?
    Are you truly here with me,Or is it my imagination?
    My mind may be playing tricks on me,I can't truly tell anymore
    How can I prove to myself that this is real,And not a dream!...

    "Imagine"

    You are like an angel sent from above,To protect me from the world
    I was once like you,But I had fallen a long time ago
    My love for you,Was what made me fall
    So will you fall to,If it's for me?...

    "We must fall as one"

    My love for you is so strong,I can hardly go a day without seeing your face
    I twist and turn,As I look for you in the dark
    You wrap your arms around me,And hold me tightly
    I feel safe and sound with you,So why am I questioning it all?!...

    "Why?"

    You commited a crime,So I guess you gotta face the music
    You are charged with stealing,Stealing my heart that night
    Under the moonlight,You confessed to me
    You said that you love me,As we stood under the stars...

    "Starlight dancin,Moonlight romance"

    I couldn't believe my ears,Was I dreaming?
    You took my hand softly into your's,And kissed it
    I can't be dreaming,This seems to real
    Dream or makebelieve,I'm gonna go with what i'm feeling...

    "Soft kisses,Sweet words"

    I know that i'm no longer dreaming,This is reality
    You and me,Under the night sky and by the ocean
    You have fallen to,We can now be together forever
    I believe it all now,This was a dream come true...

    "I love you" "This was my Moonlight Confession"...
    Last edited by Shinigami's_Angel; Jan 04, 2007 at 01:37 PM. Reason: Messed up on somethin
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    Re: Moonlight Confession

    OMG you did it again Angel I swear I'm going to become your number one fan. You have already inspired me for another poem but I will wait to write it. *Hugs* Thank you for the Inspiration.
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    Re: Moonlight Confession

    Outstanding Job Angel!!! This song came out great, it's awesome every word of the poem has emotion! Truly a heart felt poem! I love it! Angel can I borrow your talent until I get my song done please??? lol! *Hugs Angel* You did a wonderful job and I'm proud to be your fan!!!

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    Re: Moonlight Confession

    i think that your poem is very good i like it a lot
    Light, pain, sarrow, destruction, Love nature and all living things as the sun passes through the sky everyday.
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    @ Ky-lyrra-Thank you sooooo much Ky-lyrra!!!! *hugs* I'm glad that you liked it so much.And i'm also very happy that i'm inspired you again.

    @ BlueFox1-Thank you soooooo much Fox!!! *hugs* I'm glad that you thought it cane out well,I was so worried lol. And sure you can borrow some,if there's any left that as lol.

    @ Yokama-Thank you very much Yokama *hugs* I'm glad that you think my song good and i'm glad that you liked it.
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    Re: Moonlight Confession

    I really loved it sis! That was such a romantic song. I feel the same way about my boyfriend and how he makes me feel. Great job and I can't wait to read more.
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    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Wooow...i Like this..your poem make me remember someone special ..but Now,just Sweet memory for me..make me full of dream

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    Re: Moonlight Confession

    @ CherryBlossom18-Thank you soooooo very much again Sis!!! *hugs* I'm so happy that you liked it so much. And hopefully even my next 1 will be even better lol.

    @ kujara-I'm glad that you liked it so much Kujara!! *hugs* Thank you for commenting on it.
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