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Reply With QuoteOh my my! Such a sad poem yet so very wonderful! Atualy I can understand because it's happened to me before! Anyways exsellent poem hope to see more!!^^
As we stood arguing in the road,
this is when his true colors showed.
He turns to walk away
Of course, I try and convince him to stay.
I yell "Please stop! We just need to talk!"
He only continues to walk.
My mind begins to race.
"None of this makes sense!"
Before I know it, He's beyond the fence...
This is how he broke my heart.
He turns only to say; "I hate you"
Those three words ripped it apart.
It was then I felt no one could understand my pain,
As I stood soaking in the moonlight rain...
Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
Oh my my! Such a sad poem yet so very wonderful! Atualy I can understand because it's happened to me before! Anyways exsellent poem hope to see more!!^^
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Woha!!!!!! OMG! This is wonderful! Just great!!! I love every single thing about this poem... I knew you could charm me Seirika... First thing I would like to say to the lyrical "me" here is that I know exactly how you feel... guys that walk out on you are terrible!!! Boys who run away at the smallest complication... I had to lock my ex in my room to be able to talk to him a lill bit of serious talk and you know what- he ran the same at the end- you shouldn't try and fight for a guy like that- if he'd really love you he'd try to work it out...
Ok, that was just something from my mind... The poem is great!!! A great work here!!! I love it!!! And the ending is just per-fect!!!! Wonderful!!
I'll be waiting forward for more!!!
Thank you..Sorry you two had to experience that,but,in time you can always find new love.
Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
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