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    Moonlight Rain

    As we stood arguing in the road,
    this is when his true colors showed.
    He turns to walk away
    Of course, I try and convince him to stay.
    I yell "Please stop! We just need to talk!"
    He only continues to walk.
    My mind begins to race.
    "None of this makes sense!"
    Before I know it, He's beyond the fence...
    This is how he broke my heart.
    He turns only to say; "I hate you"
    Those three words ripped it apart.
    It was then I felt no one could understand my pain,
    As I stood soaking in the moonlight rain...

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: Moonlight Rain

    Oh my my! Such a sad poem yet so very wonderful! Atualy I can understand because it's happened to me before! Anyways exsellent poem hope to see more!!^^



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    Re: Moonlight Rain

    Woha!!!!!! OMG! This is wonderful! Just great!!! I love every single thing about this poem... I knew you could charm me Seirika... First thing I would like to say to the lyrical "me" here is that I know exactly how you feel... guys that walk out on you are terrible!!! Boys who run away at the smallest complication... I had to lock my ex in my room to be able to talk to him a lill bit of serious talk and you know what- he ran the same at the end- you shouldn't try and fight for a guy like that- if he'd really love you he'd try to work it out...

    Ok, that was just something from my mind... The poem is great!!! A great work here!!! I love it!!! And the ending is just per-fect!!!! Wonderful!!

    I'll be waiting forward for more!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Moonlight Rain

    Thank you..Sorry you two had to experience that,but,in time you can always find new love.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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