" The moonlight " A tribute to nightly found love.
The Moonlight:
The moon is so mysterious,
It just sit’s up there staring down,
When I look at it,
It reminds me of you,
Your smile,
Your touch,
Your warmth,
Your love,
I cannot go on without you,
I look to the moon for you,
I look to the moon for us,
Its light shows you where I am,
Don’t you see me down here?
Don’t you see my crying?
This is all for you,
I left you there to save you,
My love for you cannot compare,
Not even in this despair,
May I be at a mountain, ocean, or anywhere else you can still see me there,
Just remember to look into the moonlight,
I am there,
And so are you.
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lol, very moon oriented there, viper. There were some bits i didnt get at first then i reread it again and i get it. It's quite nice dude. BTW love u're new siggy there.
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I have been working with a gimp 2.0 tut fourm lately.
They helpt alot with it.
I fixed the stuck text problem.
Thx for the support.
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The moon is so mysterious,
It just sit’s up there staring down,
When I look at it,
It reminds me of you,
Your smile,
Your touch,
Your warmth,
Your love,
I really like this part, nicely well written man, keep it up.
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Thank you very much for the support :)
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awesome poem, man... one thing though... "I look AT the moon..." we don't look TO the moon.. we look AT it... :) anyway, congratulations for a job well done! keep 'em coming!
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You can to look to the moon. It means looking in the direction of the moon. It's just a more common way to say look at the moon. Oh well. Sorry. I hate correcting people, even if it seems untrue. Anyways, go viper!! Awsomeness with the poemness man! Gots to go, buh-bye.
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Cya later.
I am really good but I write with felling and passion.