" The moonlight " A tribute to nightly found love.

viper11025 · May 13, 2006, 12:44 PM

The Moonlight:

The moon is so mysterious,
It just sit’s up there staring down,
When I look at it,
It reminds me of you,
Your smile,
Your touch,
Your warmth,
Your love,
I cannot go on without you,
I look to the moon for you,
I look to the moon for us,
Its light shows you where I am,
Don’t you see me down here?
Don’t you see my crying?
This is all for you,
I left you there to save you,
My love for you cannot compare,
Not even in this despair,
May I be at a mountain, ocean, or anywhere else you can still see me there,
Just remember to look into the moonlight,
I am there,
And so are you.

*Blade X* · May 13, 2006, 12:58 PM

lol, very moon oriented there, viper. There were some bits i didnt get at first then i reread it again and i get it. It's quite nice dude. BTW love u're new siggy there.

viper11025 · May 13, 2006, 01:01 PM

I have been working with a gimp 2.0 tut fourm lately.
They helpt alot with it.
I fixed the stuck text problem.
Thx for the support.

*ketaro* · May 13, 2006, 02:48 PM

Quote:

The moon is so mysterious,
It just sit’s up there staring down,
When I look at it,
It reminds me of you,
Your smile,
Your touch,
Your warmth,
Your love,

I really like this part, nicely well written man, keep it up.

viper11025 · May 13, 2006, 04:02 PM

Thank you very much for the support

sachiko ueto · May 14, 2006, 06:44 AM

awesome poem, man... one thing though... "I look AT the moon..." we don't look TO the moon.. we look AT it...

anyway, congratulations for a job well done! keep 'em coming!

Red_Wings · May 14, 2006, 08:41 AM

You can to look to the moon. It means looking in the direction of the moon. It's just a more common way to say look at the moon. Oh well. Sorry. I hate correcting people, even if it seems untrue. Anyways, go viper!! Awsomeness with the poemness man! Gots to go, buh-bye.

viper11025 · May 14, 2006, 11:10 AM

Cya later.
I am really good but I write with felling and passion.

*Blade X* · May 14, 2006, 11:19 AM

dude u should go read my new poem Summer Time. I think u jus got beats

viper11025 · May 14, 2006, 11:40 AM

Lol I will.
Cya there.
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viper11025 Under Surveilance Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: " Unknown & Unseen" Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 359	" The moonlight " A tribute to nightly found love. The Moonlight: The moon is so mysterious, It just sit’s up there staring down, When I look at it, It reminds me of you, Your smile, Your touch, Your warmth, Your love, I cannot go on without you, I look to the moon for you, I look to the moon for us, Its light shows you where I am, Don’t you see me down here? Don’t you see my crying? This is all for you, I left you there to save you, My love for you cannot compare, Not even in this despair, May I be at a mountain, ocean, or anywhere else you can still see me there, Just remember to look into the moonlight, I am there, And so are you.
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Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,315	Re: " The moonlight " A tribute to nightly found love. lol, very moon oriented there, viper. There were some bits i didnt get at first then i reread it again and i get it. It's quite nice dude. BTW love u're new siggy there. __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra Last edited by Blade X; May 13, 2006 at 01:02 PM.
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sachiko ueto Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: himitsu..... Posts: 168 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 258	Re: " The moonlight " A tribute to nightly found love. awesome poem, man... one thing though... "I look AT the moon..." we don't look TO the moon.. we look AT it... anyway, congratulations for a job well done! keep 'em coming! __________________ They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.
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Red_Wings Newbie Join Date: May 2006 Location: America Posts: 70 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: " The moonlight " A tribute to nightly found love. You can to look to the moon. It means looking in the direction of the moon. It's just a more common way to say look at the moon. Oh well. Sorry. I hate correcting people, even if it seems untrue. Anyways, go viper!! Awsomeness with the poemness man! Gots to go, buh-bye. __________________ Come play with me...
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viper11025 Under Surveilance Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: " Unknown & Unseen" Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 359	Re: " The moonlight " A tribute to nightly found love. Cya later. I am really good but I write with felling and passion.
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Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,315	Re: " The moonlight " A tribute to nightly found love. dude u should go read my new poem Summer Time. I think u jus got beats __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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