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Moonlit
The moon runs with me.
It stalks me
Chases me.
Follows me.
Haunts me
All night long.
The moon cascades with me
It stares at me.
Attends my side.
All night long.
It's morning.
The moon says goodnight.
And I wait in the daylight for another moonlit night.
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Re: Moonlit
nice poem qiuck and with a good rythum
but hey! the moon never says goodbye!
havent you ever looked up into the sky when the sun is up and near the horizion you can still see the moon?!?
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Re: Moonlit
Very good poem.
The picture gose very nicely with it.
The way you wrote it really compimented it.
Well I hope to see more of your work.(^.^)
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Re: Moonlit
yay! you gals like it^_^
I'm writing so much poems!
I'll be posting poems for my freinds sometimes but not all the time.
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Re: Moonlit
i wish i had your skills! it's so good! i love it! it makes me think of wearwolves!
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I don't have skills I just write what I want to,
I sometimes don't even pay attention to what I write ^^;;;
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Werewolfes? err... it's 4 am here... :x
and yet u make us suprised flamy boy :p go friend~ spread it with all ur will and i will be here to receive it :p
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Re: Moonlit
yay!! you all like my poem^_^
hahah well thanks for the comments