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    More or Less

    A rather odd story of a person who didn't want to be friends with someone but ended up falling for that someone... Don't get me wrong but nothing happened to me!! O_o;

    -MORE OR LESS-

    More or less,
    I hated to know
    Being frends with you,
    I wouldn't think so

    More or less,
    You talked
    I did different
    I mocked

    More or less,
    I apologized
    You smiled at me
    It was okay, I realized

    More or less,
    We became friends
    I started to like you
    I hope our friendship won't end

    More or less,
    Our friendship was lost
    Becoming something more
    Was the cause

    More or less,
    I can do nothing but stay silent
    I needed to know
    What this meant

    More or less,
    I never bothered to open up
    You never knew
    You're the one I wish to glomp

    More or less,
    I still never told you
    I had secret feelings
    You didn't have a clue

    More or less,
    It was too late
    You foud someone else,
    Your new soul mate

    More or less,
    I still have secrets
    I still hold on, though,
    On the friendship bracelets

    More or less,
    Years have passed
    We haven't seen each other
    Until what occured was a mass

    More or less,
    You entered the afterlife
    I was hurt
    For you, I could no longer strife

    More or less,
    I heard a sob
    I turned to see who weeped
    It was your love

    More or less,
    I walked to your mate
    I gave a friendly hug with a feeling
    The opposite of hate

    More or less,
    Your partner cried
    There wasn't any longer
    A reason to hide

    More or less,
    I comforted this other
    I thought for a while
    Then I motioned to whisper

    I said

    More or less,
    We loved you

    When what I meant was...

    More or less,
    I loved you

    I do, I care for you because I can. I can because I want to. And I want to... because you said that I couldn't...
    Yet... Who... would love a demon like me...?


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    Re: More or Less

    I don't know how to say this but umm...... It wasn't really good lets just put it like that

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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    Re: More or Less

    I thought it was pretty good. It's kind of sad that the protagonist of the poem was never able to declare their love for the friend.

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    Re: More or Less

    Quote Originally Posted by sora the king of dreams
    I don't know how to say this but umm...... It wasn't really good lets just put it like that
    It's okay. ^^ Understandable. It's only my second poem, anyway...
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    Quote Originally Posted by whitefoxdemon
    I thought it was pretty good. It's kind of sad that the protagonist of the poem was never able to declare their love for the friend.
    Pretty good, huh~? ^^ Thanks.
    Last edited by LostDemon102; May 20, 2006 at 09:30 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

    I do, I care for you because I can. I can because I want to. And I want to... because you said that I couldn't...
    Yet... Who... would love a demon like me...?


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    Re: More or Less

    Very nice poem Lil sad..but I know the feeling.

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    Re: More or Less

    Wow what a story! I loved the meaning behind it, but I felt it was a little long. And also when you put 'glomp'
    More or less,
    I never bothered to open up
    You never knew
    You're the one I wish to glomp
    I didn't think it really went.
    But overall it was great, keep it up!

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: More or Less

    I like it cant wait to here your others

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
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    Re: More or Less

    I'll reply to you all just like this... *ahem* Thank you for posting here~!! ^^ I didn't think it would get much attention but thanks, anyway~!! ^^

    Bye~!!

    I do, I care for you because I can. I can because I want to. And I want to... because you said that I couldn't...
    Yet... Who... would love a demon like me...?


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