more poems^_^

Nightmare Or Life?
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Bloody handprints On the floor,
theres no escape,
no living anymore.
Dark is the room, Red is your mind,h
ere is your doom,
it has come too soon.
The light does not seep through,
the blood cascaded on you,
the footsteps coming closer,
your knees are black and blue.
You try to escape,
but the doorknob slowly turns,
your mouth is dry,
your senses burn...
You see a pair of shoes,
you see a pair of green eyes,
you scream in terror,
the terror doesnt sigh.
He grabs a big old knife,
your stuck in the bloody corner,
he slices you with a huge sythe,
then comes in for more.
You suddenly awoken...your safe...
There in the darkness a pair of green eyes,
was it just a dream...
Or is it your own life?

Field Of Black Rose Petal Flowers
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If you smile at me I won't
When I do, it feels as if I am being choked
Smiling on the outside
Dying and being murdered on the inside
True convincing fake smiles are concealing lies
Truth only resting behind my eyes
Urging to abandon this world I am living in
Resting my head down to imagine
Of an imaginary life
Existence to where I shall not realease pain by the knife
Laying inside myself for hours
Dreaming in a field full of silky black rose petal flowers
This imaginary life I pray to exist
Actually having to live for a purpose
Soon I know I'll wake from this dream
Reminding me its not happening
Suddenly, I know I am not sleeping
Awaken in my living nightmares and monsters screaming my name
Pleading to stay in my imaginary life, for the two are not the same
Bless me with you death
Steal every last one of my breaths
Breathe in and take my life away
Make me suffer no more only lasting this day
Poison me inside
Watch me suffer on the outside
Choke me until I lie still
Take out all your anger on me as your will
Urge me to breathe no more
Darkness consuming as I lie on the floor
Pool surrounding in crimson blood
I see it more as mystical mud
Taking me there as things fade
Others thinking my life is a jade
Imaginary life coming true
All I have to thank is you
I am off to a neverland
Neverland meaning...never again sad.

cool poems they're all dark and gothic
awesome XD
thanks for your comments

I love the darkness. Its greatly made, but if your looking for some negititve words.

You shouldn't make each line so small. Not that I am saying make it big either.

You gammers lacking.

other then that. You Vocab is not bad, I like the choice of words.

Keep them coming~