awww my faves poems by you Silver!!!
Still thing Serenity Rules!!!
These were wrote seperately but a lot have told me they seem like they should go together.
Butterflies & Roses
Butterflies and roses
sweet scents filling noses
lovers holding hands in a park
cupids arrow again hit the mark
passion in a thought
blessed is all god has wrought
A man looking on
realizes half his life has gone
saddened he turns away
hoping love finds him some day
though the park he strolls
in the distance a church bell tolls
Serenity
the wind gently blows
the green grasses slowly grow.
birds on high are singing
while in the church below
choir voices are ringing
lovers walking
old women talking
a picture of serenity
never ment to last for eternity.
No sig, and Hassun can suck my butt
awww my faves poems by you Silver!!!
Still thing Serenity Rules!!!
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Hmm. Yes, the second should be edited to compliment the first. Other than that? Capitalization would be nice.
Seduced by Flesh
Thank you Kasai
some day i might get around to mergeing them, i feel they are some of my better work, though i think my favorite i've ever written was the one i wrote for my grandmother (posted on diff thread) and yea these ones deserve better punctuation and capitalization, they are less free verse and more traditional.
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