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    More Than Ever

    To my fiance: Shade/K' Heart.

    My love for you
    Has never been
    Half as strong
    As it is now.
    Everything you do
    Is more perfect
    Your smile
    Your laugh
    Your sweet words
    Your kisses
    Everything you say
    Is more true
    And everything single hug
    Every touch
    Every “I love you”
    Means more to me
    Than ever before
    I’ll never forget this day
    As I feel the tears stream down
    My smiling face
    And my heart is warm
    Just thinking that you’re there
    And knowing you’ll never go
    I can’t explain how I feel for you
    So deep
    So strong
    So true
    And so pure
    So just know these words
    Mean more than ever
    I love you.

    ~ Julia (Red Rose)
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    very awesome poem ,you show such devotion to himand i love how you ecpressed your love its pretty cool.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    that was sweet!! nice poem sincere i bet you that shake/K'heart will love it.

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    Thanks you guys I'm glad you liked it. It just came to me and I had to write it down. And Ketaro, yes he did love it. Thanks for the comments!
    C:\Documents and Settings\Julia\My Documents\My Pictures\Siggy.jpg
    A white rose no longer alone
    I know who's heart it is to represent
    I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
    For he's the one that's heaven sent. :
    I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums

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    It's full of good emotions, passions and positivity. I'm sure anyone would love this if they are in love!!!

    I guess love will always be the most important subject in poetry, it's so powerful any way we look at it...

    Sincere, I just can't think of a remark to say against it...passionate is all I can say
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    I'm not really into poems that much. However, I'm glad I checked this one out. An extremely beautiful love poem that expresses sincere (pun intended) love.

    My personal favorite lines:
    "So deep
    So strong
    So true"

    And I love the fact that you ended with a prompt "I love you."

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    This poem is really made from the heart. it was well adn pretty for me...

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