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    More than Pain

    Well this is something really angry, at least that's how I see it... Warning! It' s fictioned- not about real life...

    To understand
    That you shall not help me
    When I lie wounded on the ground,
    Drowning in my own blood,
    Crying out the last tears of hope,
    Cursing the day I was born.
    To understand is harder than bear the pain...

    To be exchanged
    For someone else in town.
    To be ignored
    While screaming out promises of past.
    To be forgotten
    And left all alone to cry.
    To be unwanted
    Is more painfull than dying.

    What have I done?
    To earn this?
    Why do you make me
    Fell the way I do?
    Why can't I accept
    That nothing is forever?

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: More than Pain

    extremely extremely good i loved every part of this

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    Re: More than Pain

    Wow!!! now you' re a fast reader!!! ^^ Thank you very much... I' m glad you like it so much!
    It' s just something that came into my mind last evening... and I had enough anger in me to pull it through...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: More than Pain

    wow
    I love it alot of emotion into every word.
    wowo I like it alot.
    keep up the good work.

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    Re: More than Pain

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Why can't I accept
    That nothing is forever?
    When\if you do learn to accept it. Please tell me how you did it.

    Although, its the purity and innocents in a person that induces the belief that maybe... "nothing" won't last much longer. The good in us, makes us believe that somethings DO last forever. Some call it... hope.

    Hope in forever makes alot of sense if you have faith in loyalty. But lately, loyalty seems like it isn't worth a penny. Loyalty is almost rare enough to be sold on the black market. No wonder we're all so lost.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: More than Pain

    @.@ laura...such a sad poem... sheesh... :/ 10/10... thats my rating...now wheres the tissue box...

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    Re: More than Pain

    Why thank You very much guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

    @ Princess:
    I'm glad you like it... and I'm glad those emotions can be felt... And I always try my best when it comes to AO ^^

    @ Peach:
    I don't think I' ll be able to ever accept it... I always have hope... and I'll always have faith in loyality and will be deceived many times... But in the end, I'm sure it' ll be alright... it always ends the same ayways....

    @ Ray:
    Oh... don't try to tell me it made you cry... I know it couldn' t possibly ^^
    Could it? @.@
    10/10!!!!!!????? WoW!!!!! Thank You!!! I didn't think it was that good....

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    Re: More than Pain

    xD good one..it went way off charts..

    uuh..did i cry...i don't remember already...sheesh @.@

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