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    Re: More than Pain

    why do your poems seem better when your mad i dont but i love this one better than the last one keep up the great work*this was first one ive read today*i love the work lasura

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    Re: More than Pain

    Very strong. I like it very much. It seems like poems that are somewhat out of anger show greater emphasis.

    They say, "I will die for my country." I never hear them say, "I will kill for my country."

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    Re: More than Pain

    Thank You Chaos and halo3!!! ^^
    @ halo3master:
    I guess it's just like Chaos said. I guess anger is a very strong feeling and I need emotions to write something good- I just put all those emotions in some words. That is why those of anger and pain are better then others... I think I'll never be a writer good enough to write a good poem just because it is asked and not because those are just feelings I have to put down on paper.
    I'll make sure to get better in my works ^^
    Thank You very much for always supporting me ^^

    And thank You levitatinganimelover for the 15/10!!!!! That's something WoW!!! ^^

    And then it's clear that you didn't cry Ray ^^ you'd remember that...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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