HolderOfTheDarkChalice

My life is what i made it and so was what
i did to have you by my side , everything
thing i have shown you has been so real
that you need more than words to show
that you love me.

What would you do? , to have my love
and to keep it forever so that no one
could ever make it there's? , saying you
love me just isn't enough when words are
all you give me.

What would you do , if my heart was
torn in two and that your love for me
is more than real was meant just for me
baby i know you love me but actions they
say speak louder than any word that can be
spoken.

How would you act if your words no longer
affected me like they did when we first met?
would you let things go or would you hold me
tight as the wind blew over me in the midnight air
things just wouldn't be the same if you showed your
feelings and not just words.

More than words make a love go strong so strong
that words of love and hope would fade away becuase
i would know just by your actions things just wouldn't be
the same if you showed more than words that love is what
you want me to have , more than words is all you have to
do to make our love more than anything thing spoken could
ever would or will.

What would happen if saying i love you dosnt make
things new for us these things i say are just words
they mean nothing with out the actions behind them
so let me show you what i mean by showing me the same
more than words......

this poem is to show how saying i love you is meaningless
unless you back them with action becuase all things in life
no matter how small or big really have no place in ones life
with out showing how much it means to be with the one
your with. comments and sugestions are welcomed

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Lotski

Very nice! a true love longing..
More Than Words! (with exclamation??)
Worth reading.
Although try to avoid repitition of words.
Check the spelling buddy, but not so many..
Maybe it was your keyboard's mistake hehehehe..

use commas so that the reader can breath
and can trully understand your poem..

aside from that, keep up the good job!

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HolderOfTheDarkChalice

lol umm yeah it as my keyboard anyway thanks for the
comment and the repdeditveness i was working for a
way to ask questions while not being so random with it.

im still working on that though but thanks for the
advice i will work with the ummm keybaord lol

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CherryBlossom18

Very sweet poem that makes so much sense. You can say I love you to the one you're with,but showing someone how much you love them is one of the greatest ways to do that other than marrying them. I can't wait to read more of your work.

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