!beast (Nov 05, 2009)
Wind wipping through the trees.
Sun setting beneath the sand.
Moons light swallowing the seas.
Earths rain falling upon the land.
They bend and break.
The reflections show.
The tides come in.
The showers come and go.
They fall to the ground with unsettling force.
Trickerey is bound to these indecribable scenes.
Shells of life long past are washed upon the shores.
Giving life to all beauty and greenes.
if you can not understand this poem send me a pm or wat not and ill explain it to you ok?
lol its simpler than you may think
Nice and welcoming. Great use of words also. ^ ^
This is a lovely poem. I have not really seen this type of work from you before. Usually it is love or dark subject matter but you did a beautiful job on this poem. Too often nature poems are very sappy, but not this one. Let us see a few more. It should be "indescribable," you forgot the "s."
I agree with beast. The poem is nicely written; great use of imagery. It's pretty deep, too. I like it.
I've always loved nature and the outdoors, and this poem almost makes me feel closer to them. It definitely makes me feel like I'm outside. Good Job.
Crazy people don't know they're going crazy. They think they're getting saner.