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    Motionless

    Motionless


    Alone and abandoned,
    Without a friend nor a foe;
    Hopeless and weakened
    From head to toe.

    Trials and crises
    Gave a million wails and cries;
    Sadness only caresses
    Heart torn to bits.

    Yearning and searching
    For that thing described as hope;
    Pointless yet trying
    To learn to cope.


    author's notes: it's bean eons since I last created a poem. This one supposed to be a happy rhyme but I ended up having a sad one... Critiques and comments are really helpful thanks for reading.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Motionless

    the poem is nicely put together and very interesting.
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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    Re: Motionless

    ^^ Thanks for your comment PhoenixSara. I am happy that this poem interests you. ^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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