the poem is nicely put together and very interesting.
Motionless
Alone and abandoned,
Without a friend nor a foe;
Hopeless and weakened
From head to toe.
Trials and crises
Gave a million wails and cries;
Sadness only caresses
Heart torn to bits.
Yearning and searching
For that thing described as hope;
Pointless yet trying
To learn to cope.
author's notes: it's bean eons since I last created a poem. This one supposed to be a happy rhyme but I ended up having a sad one... Critiques and comments are really helpful thanks for reading.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
the poem is nicely put together and very interesting.
"In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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^^ Thanks for your comment PhoenixSara. I am happy that this poem interests you. ^^
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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