Thread: Motorcycle Drive By

Wow
Your into the whole Akira fan fic.
Good poem.

Thanks! I've never actually seen Akira, but I've read the reviews. It seems good. Do people who watch akira write fan stuff like mine, or something?

Originally Posted by Jet Black

Sorry, everyone. I've just been obsessed with Wolfwood lately.... At least this one sums up Wolfwoods character pretty well....
Just so you know, I'm talking about a character from Trigun.

Motorcycle Drive-By

Summer time and the wind is blowing outside
In lower Chelsea and I don't know
What I'm doing in this city.

The sun is always in my eyes.
It crashes through the windows
And I'm sleeping on the couch
When I came to visit you.
That's when I knew
That I could never have you.
I knew that before you did.
Still I'm the one who's stupid
And there's this burning
Like there's always been
I never been so alone
And I've
Never been so alive

Visions of you on a motorcycle drive by
The cigarette ash flies in your eyes
And you don't mind, you smile
And say the world doesn't fit with you
I don't believe you, you're so serene.
Careening through the universe
Your axis on a tilt, you're guiltless and free
I hope you take a piece of me with you.
And there's things I'd like to do
That you don't believe in.
I would like to build something
But you'll never see it happen
And there's this burning
Like there's always been
I've never been so alone
And I've
Never been so alive

Where's the soul I want to know?
This whole world is evil,
The surface is everything.
But I could never do that.
Someone would see through that.
And this is our last time
We'll be friends again.
I'll get over you, you'll wonder who I am.
And there's this burning
Just like there's always been
I've never been so alone
And I've,
Never been so alive.
(So alive)

I go home to the coast
It starts to rain I paddle out on the water
Alone.
Taste the salt and taste the pain
I'm not thinking of you again.
Summer dies and swells rise
The sun goes down in my eyes
See this rolling wave
Darkly coming, to take me
Home.
And I've never been so alone
And I've
Never been so alive.

nice

This doesn't make me think of Akira one bit, Trigun I haven't watched since...about three years ago so can't remember the character you are representing in this writting. It's really nice though, everything seems to have its place and is comforting to read.

wow i love your poem your good

A wonderful poem by Jet! Took time to read it more than once, and I have to say that your poem carries a meaning more than just having to do with motorcycles. I love long/unique poems devoted to someone or something that you adore. You did a wicked job, my friend. Keep it up! Really, I am impressed. Show us more please!

BTW, you don't have to say sorry. ^_^

Wow ... nice LONG poem ... I'm tired of saying "good work" ... so it's impeccable XD