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    Motorcycle Drive By

    Sorry, everyone. I've just been obsessed with Wolfwood lately.... At least this one sums up Wolfwoods character pretty well....
    Just so you know, I'm talking about a character from Trigun.

    Motorcycle Drive-By

    Summer time and the wind is blowing outside
    In lower Chelsea and I don't know
    What I'm doing in this city.

    The sun is always in my eyes.
    It crashes through the windows
    And I'm sleeping on the couch
    When I came to visit you.
    That's when I knew
    That I could never have you.
    I knew that before you did.
    Still I'm the one who's stupid
    And there's this burning
    Like there's always been
    I never been so alone
    And I've
    Never been so alive

    Visions of you on a motorcycle drive by
    The cigarette ash flies in your eyes
    And you don't mind, you smile
    And say the world doesn't fit with you
    I don't believe you, you're so serene.
    Careening through the universe
    Your axis on a tilt, you're guiltless and free
    I hope you take a piece of me with you.
    And there's things I'd like to do
    That you don't believe in.
    I would like to build something
    But you'll never see it happen
    And there's this burning
    Like there's always been
    I've never been so alone
    And I've
    Never been so alive

    Where's the soul I want to know?
    This whole world is evil,
    The surface is everything.
    But I could never do that.
    Someone would see through that.
    And this is our last time
    We'll be friends again.
    I'll get over you, you'll wonder who I am.
    And there's this burning
    Just like there's always been
    I've never been so alone
    And I've,
    Never been so alive.
    (So alive)

    I go home to the coast
    It starts to rain I paddle out on the water
    Alone.
    Taste the salt and taste the pain
    I'm not thinking of you again.
    Summer dies and swells rise
    The sun goes down in my eyes
    See this rolling wave
    Darkly coming, to take me
    Home.
    And I've never been so alone
    And I've
    Never been so alive.

    Thank you Sazuka for this awesome signature!

    You're a louse, Roger Smith.

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    Re: Motorcycle Drive By

    Wow
    Your into the whole Akira fan fic.
    Good poem.

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    Re: Motorcycle Drive By

    Thanks! I've never actually seen Akira, but I've read the reviews. It seems good. Do people who watch akira write fan stuff like mine, or something?

    Thank you Sazuka for this awesome signature!

    You're a louse, Roger Smith.

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    Re: Motorcycle Drive By

    Quote Originally Posted by Jet Black
    Sorry, everyone. I've just been obsessed with Wolfwood lately.... At least this one sums up Wolfwoods character pretty well....
    Just so you know, I'm talking about a character from Trigun.

    Motorcycle Drive-By

    Summer time and the wind is blowing outside
    In lower Chelsea and I don't know
    What I'm doing in this city.

    The sun is always in my eyes.
    It crashes through the windows
    And I'm sleeping on the couch
    When I came to visit you.
    That's when I knew
    That I could never have you.
    I knew that before you did.
    Still I'm the one who's stupid
    And there's this burning
    Like there's always been
    I never been so alone
    And I've
    Never been so alive

    Visions of you on a motorcycle drive by
    The cigarette ash flies in your eyes
    And you don't mind, you smile
    And say the world doesn't fit with you
    I don't believe you, you're so serene.
    Careening through the universe
    Your axis on a tilt, you're guiltless and free
    I hope you take a piece of me with you.
    And there's things I'd like to do
    That you don't believe in.
    I would like to build something
    But you'll never see it happen
    And there's this burning
    Like there's always been
    I've never been so alone
    And I've
    Never been so alive

    Where's the soul I want to know?
    This whole world is evil,
    The surface is everything.
    But I could never do that.
    Someone would see through that.
    And this is our last time
    We'll be friends again.
    I'll get over you, you'll wonder who I am.
    And there's this burning
    Just like there's always been
    I've never been so alone
    And I've,
    Never been so alive.
    (So alive)

    I go home to the coast
    It starts to rain I paddle out on the water
    Alone.
    Taste the salt and taste the pain
    I'm not thinking of you again.
    Summer dies and swells rise
    The sun goes down in my eyes
    See this rolling wave
    Darkly coming, to take me
    Home.
    And I've never been so alone
    And I've
    Never been so alive.
    nice

    awesome sig, thanx aiora

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    Re: Motorcycle Drive By

    This doesn't make me think of Akira one bit, Trigun I haven't watched since...about three years ago so can't remember the character you are representing in this writting. It's really nice though, everything seems to have its place and is comforting to read.
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    Re: Motorcycle Drive By

    wow i love your poem your good

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    Re: Motorcycle Drive By

    A wonderful poem by Jet! Took time to read it more than once, and I have to say that your poem carries a meaning more than just having to do with motorcycles. I love long/unique poems devoted to someone or something that you adore. You did a wicked job, my friend. Keep it up! Really, I am impressed. Show us more please!

    BTW, you don't have to say sorry. ^_^

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    Re: Motorcycle Drive By

    Wow ... nice LONG poem ... I'm tired of saying "good work" ... so it's impeccable XD

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