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    Just a small peom i wrote out of the blue. Please tell me weather or not it's good enough to put in my poem book or not.



    Every time I see your face.
    I ask why I'm such a disgrace.
    I don't try to salvage my heart.
    I just keep tearing it apart.
    Tell me is there no stop to this?
    Is there no way to fix?
    Is there any way I can move on?
    Tell me what am I doing wrong.
    But even though i know it'll hurt so much
    I can't stop myself from getting that rush.
    Maybe someday I will stop trying
    And finally keep my heart from dieing.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: move on

    I thought this poem is good. It reminded me on how much the heart hurts when you break up with someone. Good job Sangogirl.

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    Re: move on

    thank you. i've been trying to write different poems but so far all of them have been sad like this one. well i'm glad you liked it somewhat. maybe i'll put it in my poem book.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: move on

    This was a great poem. Although it was short it spoke volumns to me. It feels like you've had your heart broken and needed to express that. Awesome, awesome, awesome I say. Mad props for this poem.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    thank you again. i kinda did get my heart broken, i never expected it to hurt me as much as it did though. it's weird now all the poetry i write is exactly about what happened to me and i don't do it conciously.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: move on

    *gasp* I saw myself in every sentance of this. I relate to the feeling of this perfectly. To know how bad it hurts to be in someones presence, because they've broken your heart. But a piece of you still holds on even though its hurting yourself to do so.... ??? Am I close?
    ... Not Ever Again...

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