Mr intervention

The first in a long time,
The last for some time.
The old hath died of me,
And most do not remember you see.

A Shade at one point,
Mixed with a Kind Heart,
But daily this life would constantly,
Tear me so very far apart.

A simplistic style of rhyming and word play,
In which I'd try to rhyme what I can on every literarary day.
Simple in my wordage and simple in my way,
But I try to hard in what I have to say.

Many times I ryhme,
And many times I do not...
But a new person I became,
And new name was to be bought.

I am MR INTERVENTION,
By acts and not intention.
Intervening in the bad...
Seeking the good out of situations.

With this new life,
And this new strife...
I reach for the stars above,
While exploring this new love.

I shall end this poem for now,
And I wonder if I can continue at a later date.
But for now I take care of my love,
So I mustn't be late.

Later All!

MR INTERVENTION - Justin McCormick

very cool poem i liked how you made it rhyme it was simple yet full of complication because of the new you. i liked this very much. and its been forever since i have talked to you how has it been going?

Such a great poem. When I read your poem, I felt like you shared a part of you in every word. :) Cheers for the new life :D