very cool poem i liked how you made it rhyme it was simple yet full of complication because of the new you. i liked this very much. and its been forever since i have talked to you how has it been going?
The first in a long time,
The last for some time.
The old hath died of me,
And most do not remember you see.
A Shade at one point,
Mixed with a Kind Heart,
But daily this life would constantly,
Tear me so very far apart.
A simplistic style of rhyming and word play,
In which I'd try to rhyme what I can on every literarary day.
Simple in my wordage and simple in my way,
But I try to hard in what I have to say.
Many times I ryhme,
And many times I do not...
But a new person I became,
And new name was to be bought.
I am MR INTERVENTION,
By acts and not intention.
Intervening in the bad...
Seeking the good out of situations.
With this new life,
And this new strife...
I reach for the stars above,
While exploring this new love.
I shall end this poem for now,
And I wonder if I can continue at a later date.
But for now I take care of my love,
So I mustn't be late.
Later All!
MR INTERVENTION - Justin McCormick
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
very cool poem i liked how you made it rhyme it was simple yet full of complication because of the new you. i liked this very much. and its been forever since i have talked to you how has it been going?
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Such a great poem. When I read your poem, I felt like you shared a part of you in every word.Cheers for the new life
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Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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