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    Ms. Sarah

    Ms. Sarah is the riches girl in town
    Her lips is perfectly red as an apple
    And she is very pretty when wearing gown
    And she is envy by all of the people

    Every morning she will sing with her beautiful voice
    While her long thick hair is down
    And she is the fantasy of every boys
    Yes even from the other town

    Whenever she walks down the street
    She always wear heels tha is white
    And every man liked her to be greet
    Looking at her hips that is tight

    Yet her body is perfectly slender
    But her poise never fail
    She give every boys a fever
    And they always put in jail

    And every night she sleep with diffrent men
    That were rich and powerful
    Yet she never been condemned
    By men that is wise or fool

    And her life is full of luxury
    Full of money and space
    But she still do things that were dirty
    But it didn't affect her grace

    And every boys do everything to win her heart
    While the girls to defeat her fame and be glad
    And one day when the moon is apart
    Ms. Sarah's body is found covered with blood

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    Re: Ms. Sarah

    this reminds me of an older poem but i can't remember where i read it.
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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    Re: Ms. Sarah

    Quote Originally Posted by PhoenixSara View Post
    this reminds me of an older poem but i can't remember where i read it.
    I think i read one like this as well... no.. i think i wrote one like this xD

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    Re: Ms. Sarah

    well yes I din't copy it but this poem had an inspiration. My inpiration at writing this poem is the poem "Richard Cory" I really love that poem unfrotunately he died without saying the reason so I write a poem like that but it speak the reason of her death and a complete detail of her life hehehehe this is not plagarism.

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