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I never thought my love for you would grow this much stronger.
Stronger than just a crush.
We met not so long ago on the net. People told me you went what you said to be.
They told me you were something else you could be a pervy old man.
Looking A bit of a fling.
But I know.. I know in my heart that you are what you say you are.
And I believe every word you say.
Because in my heart I know you’re the one and I hope u feel the same
so this is about internet dating? ok i can see this but i dont suppose it happening to u right now cuz if it is i do think its a pervy old man. dont get too caught up real bfs are better than internet bfs or gf depening on the gender
aw lizzy~
A "Love" poem.
Nothing like the touch of the heart eh?
Center the poem new time okies?
And make it longer, there seem to be holes in the poem~
=] Beside that. w00tness
A few grammatical errors. Revision would help to filter out the mistakes.
lol thanks for the comments
@Kasai Revision?? it would help to filter out the mistakes??
@ mr.k thanks and yeah ill try to center it k but i did try to that time tho >_<
@Spin Da Ish yeah net dating yep >_< but like i think u might have a ponit but im not so sure on it tho lol
That was really good, I loved it, it makes me feel warm, :D
Keep it up