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    multiple poems

    dieing flame

    the fire in my heart was once raging,
    now all that is left is a dieing flame.
    my strength is gone, my life is coming to an end
    i dont know how i made it this long.

    i put my heart on the line so much, ive hurt myself and others.
    i cant go on, the flame is about to be snuffed.
    im done with all that is, i cant be who i am.
    im dieing now all alone.

    im crying, becuase i want to go on, i know there are beutiful things.
    i just cant bare to take the pain by myself.
    so i lay down to die, to let the fire burn out.
    this is the last words of a dieing man....




    fans
    they say they like it but is it true?
    do they just say it to make me happy?
    are the genuine are they true fans?
    i ask this cause so many dont really read my work
    they skim over it and miss the hidden messages that i leave

    the fans that are true know what i do
    only those that can decipher it are true freinds
    i try not to push and shove my way
    i dont have many freinds, but i have less people that care
    fans are nice and they keep me together, but thats only going to last so long

    i would like to say i have a lover... but i dont... and i wander from place to place always alone and yet not alone because i have fans like you





    here we go
    the secret message i leave isnt for one but for many indeed
    you think i love one but i dont know what love is
    all my life ive been hurt, cheated on left behind all alone
    i go on and on being alone i dont really want to be.
    but im afraid to get hurt again

    i fight and push away everyone in sight very few are able to break in
    i cry and cry my self to sleep, when i sleep that is
    the only thing that holds me is my own two arms nothing more
    im cold and alone in this world but i struggle on hoping for one to love me

    could it be you or the next or the next ill never know if someone doesnt reach out to me but they dont or will they?
    i dont want to be alone i want to care and be cared for.. to love and be loved
    is there anyone out there for me?
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
    http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
    this is my site come and see me there sometime!

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    Re: multiple poems

    WOW O.o I really like them. Another for the book of awsome poems by you death.
    (Dieing Flame)
    This one has realy good choice of words.
    (fans)I really like this one cause it shows that you have to be a fan to be a friend a nd a friend to be a fan.
    (Here we go)This one is good cause it shows that you can love but can't causehteres no one to love. Your poems are really good. Love them(^.^)

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
    ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~

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    Re: multiple poems

    awww thanks.. i know they have grammar flaws and punct and spelling but im glad you can see the message in them the true meaning of the heart
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    Re: multiple poems

    Dying Flame? - so you risked your heart and now your will to live is gone? and you want to keep going but its getting too late?

    Fans - well you've got this fan for as long as you want
    I'm sorry your feeling this way lately
    please be patient more will come

    Here We Go - your not alone
    many of us feel this way
    and its so hard to open up when we're afraid of what will happen
    but others cant know whats inside our hearts if we dont tell them
    show them ..a lil bit
    but dont stress out
    you've still got time
    and the loneliness may get dificult to live with
    but if you stay strong you'll have a better chance at getting what you want in the end .. love

    *hugs*

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    Re: multiple poems

    and there it is god of death and his poem~! Applause ladies and gentlemans...
    well done man im proud of u

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    Re: multiple poems

    ahhhhhhh who rated my poem??????? four stars???????? is that good? wait why does this have a rating and noone elses does.....stares* your all out to get me aint you?????? arms self with his scythe* eyes everyone*
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    Re: multiple poems

    lol! relax
    its good!!!
    lol was going to give it 5 stars but my mouse is an ass
    =(
    well just noticed the rating button on these threads lol
    so tried it out lol
    sorry

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    Re: multiple poems

    oh ok i was wondering who did that.... woooo guess i dont have to flip out after all.... thanks though!
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
    http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
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