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    Murder Me

    I know the man who murdered me.
    He lives right up the street.
    We used to be good friends.
    He always came to visit me.
    He would often cook my dinner when I was late getting home.
    I wasn't really surprised to see him in my kitchen late last night, but he was certainly surprised to see me.
    Before I even thought, before I said one word, I had two bullets in my body.
    One to the chest and one to the head.
    I don't know what his reason is and frankly I don't care, I still going to always watch over and protect him as best I can.



    {So there may be a second one to follow this I really don't know it took me three days to finally put into words and get the wording just to my liking. ~*Averian*~
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    Re: Murder Me

    awsomes poem i enjoyed reading it keep it up!

    sasuke is mine.

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    Re: Murder Me

    wow that was good.
    I liked it and the wording is good.
    Keep it up and hope to see more.^.^

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
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    Re: Murder Me

    .. Thanks... ^^ My friend and current... love intrest Trea said it was actually a bit frightening considering my neighbor next door was uh apparently murdered the same day I wrote this... I was on the other side of town... worst part is the only thing I thought to say was... "Well No more bitching about the front yard..." I almost feel bad about it... Almost!... but ah.. the guy was a prick every one but my mom agreed with what I say

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