i like this its simple, but it makes since. It's like the music of life or something in my mind. makes me think, the reason people make music, is to show their emotion to let people know that you exsist? i hope i got it right lol.
Excellent job 5/5
Is it in the words?
Maybe it is in the tune...
No, it's the way that
She plays the flute.
The music in you
is all that you are.
When you put it on paper,
people know who you are.
i like this its simple, but it makes since. It's like the music of life or something in my mind. makes me think, the reason people make music, is to show their emotion to let people know that you exsist? i hope i got it right lol.
Excellent job 5/5
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yes you did and i am glad that u are 1 or only a few that understand my work
thats questioning... I do not have a word to say to describe that work... intresting... truely....
well anyways it was very simple but to the point and by that it's to the core of the poem itself... no other things that cloud the reader from the true nature of the poem...
in other words good jobit was a great
death and life are one and the same
good poem and simple and has it meaning ... and it is great poem i will give you rate for this poem 10/10 ,good job .... =^_^=
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I like this peom, it is simple and the meaning of it is true.
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