music

starfire1036 · Jun 17, 2008, 01:11 PM

Is it in the words?
Maybe it is in the tune...
No, it's the way that
She plays the flute.

The music in you
is all that you are.
When you put it on paper,
people know who you are.

*jaderabbit* · Jun 17, 2008, 02:44 PM

i like this its simple, but it makes since. It's like the music of life or something in my mind. makes me think, the reason people make music, is to show their emotion to let people know that you exsist? i hope i got it right lol.

Excellent job 5/5

starfire1036 · Jun 17, 2008, 06:42 PM

yes you did and i am glad that u are 1 or only a few that understand my work

basilisk888 · Jun 17, 2008, 07:03 PM

thats questioning... I do not have a word to say to describe that work... intresting... truely....

well anyways it was very simple but to the point and by that it's to the core of the poem itself... no other things that cloud the reader from the true nature of the poem...

in other words good job

it was a great

Frozen Rose · Jun 21, 2008, 04:48 AM

good poem and simple and has it meaning ... and it is great poem i will give you rate for this poem 10/10 ,good job .... =^_^=

Haruko Haruhara · Jun 21, 2008, 01:45 PM

I like this peom, it is simple and the meaning of it is true

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Jun 17, 2008, 01:11 PM	#1 (permalink)
starfire1036 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 195 Thanks: 43 Thanked 15 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 8,417	music Is it in the words? Maybe it is in the tune... No, it's the way that She plays the flute. The music in you is all that you are. When you put it on paper, people know who you are.
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jaderabbit Cheetos Overlord Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: The World Posts: 3,650 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 7,251	Re: music i like this its simple, but it makes since. It's like the music of life or something in my mind. makes me think, the reason people make music, is to show their emotion to let people know that you exsist? i hope i got it right lol. Excellent job 5/5 __________________ -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate- \|THE INFAMOUS\|The Host\|Twilight Series\|Twilight Movie\|Untouched!\|
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starfire1036 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 195 Thanks: 43 Thanked 15 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 8,417	Re: music yes you did and i am glad that u are 1 or only a few that understand my work
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basilisk888 Devoted Otaku Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: death and life again Posts: 500 Thanks: 7 Thanked 14 Times in 13 Posts Credits: 14,011	Re: music thats questioning... I do not have a word to say to describe that work... intresting... truely.... well anyways it was very simple but to the point and by that it's to the core of the poem itself... no other things that cloud the reader from the true nature of the poem... in other words good job it was a great __________________ fire is good to have in hand 0.0
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Frozen Rose Teddy Bear =^_^= Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Somewhere on Saturn Posts: 641 Thanks: 6 Thanked 31 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 19,863	Re: music good poem and simple and has it meaning ... and it is great poem i will give you rate for this poem 10/10 ,good job .... =^_^= __________________ My Dreams Become Like The Rainbow Love Like the Wind You Can't See It But You Can Fell It
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Haruko Haruhara Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Hattiesburg, MS Posts: 241 Thanks: 28 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 7,809	Re: music I like this peom, it is simple and the meaning of it is true.
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