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    Cool my 2nd rap

    made this rap from scratch:
    unh! unh! unh! yah! my name is bryan I realy aint lyinn,
    when i roll down the window in my pimped out Sion,
    unh! the girls go by and they go hiya. hope u guys like it

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    Re: my 2nd rap

    HAHAHA!!! Nice one lol xD


    Meow. :3

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    Re: my 2nd rap

    Its decent, lol keep up the good work, if its your passion go for it. =/

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    Re: my 2nd rap

    roflmao thats gd but it scares me just a lil xD
    but its kewl xDD
    ‘Cause I’m broken when I’m open
    And I don’t feel like I am strong enough
    ‘Cause I’m broken when I’m lonesome
    And I don’t feel light when you’re gone away

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    Re: my 2nd rap

    its good, but its short, you should try making it longer, I would write one, but now I don't have the words for it lol. good work though,

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    Re: my 2nd rap

    Quote Originally Posted by hellknight View Post
    its good, but its short, you should try making it longer, I would write one, but now I don't have the words for it lol. good work though,
    Much agreed. You gotta try writing somethin' much longer. That line won't even hold a hook line, let alone a full verse. (Please don't think I'm coming down on you. I write music myself.)

    Aside from that, keep tryin'. You'll get it and I'll be looking forward to it.

    ...hmm, I haven't written much lately myself...


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    haha that is the one you told me a while back ^^ ################## its the fence of the century!

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    thanks everyone for the comments anfor the sugjestions apretiate it
    revenge brings only destruction of your self

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