From a light now gone,
I am alone in this darkness.
No one to help me,
No one to say everything is alright.
My heart is cold,
Like a river in winter.
My soul is dead,
Grim reaper took it and sealed it away.
My body is fading,
Like a fog passing by.
My life is through,
Like a movie with no point.
(I'm depressed)
Re: *My* ...Hmmm...
Yeah, you really sound like you're depressed.
Try smiling, like this...
Anyways, The poem was...depressing *no duh*
Very good use of adjectives
I like these two lines, I think they were awesome the way you described your body passing by like fog
Excellent!My body is fading,
Like a fog passing by.
-Zainab
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