My adorable lil sis

!Rave_Grip · Apr 14, 2007, 09:43 PM

My adorable lil sis
Rose I used to call her, her cheeks so round and red
The way she used to pout when I pinched them
Her handsome features still visible when she was stone cold

I hated the way she ignored my orders
I disliked the way she used to get me into trouble
I liked the way she used her cheekiness to get out of them, too
I loved the way she brought a smile to my face
I adored her personality, her spirit and her will to move on

I still remember the way we used to watch the stars together
How her eyes widened at the sight of the heavens
The way the stars reflected off her wonderful eyes
Everything about her was magnificent

When she was cold I would wrap blanket around her tender body
To nurture my little rose
To run my hand through her hair when she would fall asleep on me
Was something I would never give up on!

I miss the way she used to grip my thumb
Begging me not to go to the school
I would assure her by a warm and gentle hug
-And by her pinkie promise-
That I’d return to her before she could spell her name

Tears still flow out of my eyes
Melting the wall of hope and promise so quickly
To remember the way she burnt in front of me
Her small and tender body burnt into ashes

All those sweet memories
Every last drop of exhilaration
Sucked away by the unforgivable incident
Which shattered the bond between us two

Nevertheless my love will remain as strong as her will
Like her spirit to move on

~ For the sister I could never have

*lebasiara* · Apr 14, 2007, 10:57 PM

Rushil.... I am so sorry!!

I just felt a broken heart...... oh men!
I know how it is to loose a really close love one...
The poem is beautiful.....

!The White Wolf · Apr 14, 2007, 11:09 PM

Wow. What a sad poem, Rushil. I'm sorry you had to go through that. As much as I hate the way my little sister gets me into trouble.. and as much as I hate the way she talks to me.. I love her, and could never imagine losing her. You're stronger than me for even writing it down. It really was a beautiful poem.

*RayMe* · Apr 15, 2007, 11:03 AM

Ah.. sad but u tried to show the joy you once had with her...

Good poem

really nice...

!KimiFemi · Apr 17, 2007, 08:50 PM

Oh no
I dont know what I'd do if anything happend to my lil brother
I'm sorry for your loss
the poem is very moving

*Lasura* · Apr 23, 2007, 12:26 PM

Cheese... You almost made me cry here...
A really beautiful poem!!!!! I liked it, you've but a lot of emotions in it, that's the best thing you can do when writting a poem...

!Jamie5192 · Apr 23, 2007, 01:15 PM

Why would you write something so sad??? It was beatutifully written but It's sad.... I wish I could have a little sis but not that way...

*RayMe* · Apr 23, 2007, 03:51 PM

I had many lil sis but they turn out to be bad for me.. sheesh -.-
making my life a living hell.. i better run to them college soon ~.~ sheesh

Apr 14, 2007, 09:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
!Rave_Grip Banned Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,431 Thanks: 2 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts	My adorable lil sis My adorable lil sis Rose I used to call her, her cheeks so round and red The way she used to pout when I pinched them Her handsome features still visible when she was stone cold I hated the way she ignored my orders I disliked the way she used to get me into trouble I liked the way she used her cheekiness to get out of them, too I loved the way she brought a smile to my face I adored her personality, her spirit and her will to move on I still remember the way we used to watch the stars together How her eyes widened at the sight of the heavens The way the stars reflected off her wonderful eyes Everything about her was magnificent When she was cold I would wrap blanket around her tender body To nurture my little rose To run my hand through her hair when she would fall asleep on me Was something I would never give up on! I miss the way she used to grip my thumb Begging me not to go to the school I would assure her by a warm and gentle hug -And by her pinkie promise- That I’d return to her before she could spell her name Tears still flow out of my eyes Melting the wall of hope and promise so quickly To remember the way she burnt in front of me Her small and tender body burnt into ashes All those sweet memories Every last drop of exhilaration Sucked away by the unforgivable incident Which shattered the bond between us two Nevertheless my love will remain as strong as her will Like her spirit to move on ~ For the sister I could never have
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Apr 14, 2007, 10:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
lebasiara Live and feel the music Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: 16th Note Treble Clef St, Bass Clef, Grand Staff 6438 Posts: 1,063 Thanks: 22 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts	Re: My adorable lil sis Rushil.... I am so sorry!! I just felt a broken heart...... oh men! I know how it is to loose a really close love one... The poem is beautiful..... __________________ Nothing less from Pyro ^_^ Great Sig ^_^ THANK YOU!!!! $C:\Documents and Settings\MARA\My Documents\My Pictures\Anime room\sigs\music_sig1 mia ^_^.jpg$ SCHOOL LOAD!!!!! AAAAAAAARGH!!!!!ONE MORE YEAR!!!! I CAN DO THIS!!!!!!
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Apr 14, 2007, 11:09 PM	#3 (permalink)
!The White Wolf Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 2,580 Thanks: 9 Thanked 13 Times in 11 Posts	Re: My adorable lil sis Wow. What a sad poem, Rushil. I'm sorry you had to go through that. As much as I hate the way my little sister gets me into trouble.. and as much as I hate the way she talks to me.. I love her, and could never imagine losing her. You're stronger than me for even writing it down. It really was a beautiful poem.
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,808 Thanks: 76 Thanked 45 Times in 42 Posts	Re: My adorable lil sis Ah.. sad but u tried to show the joy you once had with her... Good poem really nice... __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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!KimiFemi Banned Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: So many places... I cant remember ... Posts: 483 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: My adorable lil sis Oh no I dont know what I'd do if anything happend to my lil brother I'm sorry for your loss the poem is very moving
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Apr 23, 2007, 12:26 PM	#6 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,885 Thanks: 56 Thanked 38 Times in 35 Posts	Re: My adorable lil sis Cheese... You almost made me cry here... A really beautiful poem!!!!! I liked it, you've but a lot of emotions in it, that's the best thing you can do when writting a poem... __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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!Jamie5192 Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 377 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: My adorable lil sis Why would you write something so sad??? It was beatutifully written but It's sad.... I wish I could have a little sis but not that way...
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,808 Thanks: 76 Thanked 45 Times in 42 Posts	Re: My adorable lil sis I had many lil sis but they turn out to be bad for me.. sheesh -.- making my life a living hell.. i better run to them college soon ~.~ sheesh __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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