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  1. Jun 23, 2007 07:14 PM #1
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    My Angel

    My fate is this
    To sit alone and bring pain to others
    My soul shall eternally wander
    While you are free to fly

    I want to be like you
    Be with you forever
    And stop my heart from burning

    Life brings death
    Death brings life
    Never the two shall meet

    But how I pray to be accepted
    And I long to be in your arms
    Hold me my angel
    Break my spell of lonliness....



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    Re: My Angel

    nice poem, reminds me of how one wants to be with someone but really can't.
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    Re: My Angel

    awww thank you so much! Can some of you please vote here i need the points?



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  4. Jun 24, 2007 05:31 AM #4
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    Re: My Angel

    This is very nice!!! I like this poem of yours, is very beautiful, especially I like the part where you talk about life and death, this sad great couple, who love each other so much and make each other complete but are never able to be together...

    I enjoy reading your poems and I feel that they're getting better with each day...

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  5. Jun 24, 2007 06:22 AM #5
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    Re: My Angel

    Hmm.. nicely done there Akura.. ^^ i c a big spark of hope.. i love poems about love and hopes... ^^ it gives confidence and assurance... ahh..but it was quite dark at first ^^
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    Re: My Angel

    omg so very powerfull wording how can you do it ttyl!!i love your powerfull poems♥da princess
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    Re: My Angel

    I agree with you ice viper it does remind me of someone that wants to be with someone they lvoe but they can not. Verry good Akura. Nicely done keep it up. this one is verry powerfull I love it.
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