My Angel

Angels continue watching me
doing my bad and good deeds
I wonder anyone could just
Help me with my useless needs

I've been trouble and it seems
God hasn't notice at all
I wonder if anyone could tell
I've been troubled during this fall

My guardian angel where are
You please answer me
Your that only love I want and
Your that only to set me free

I know this is no fairy tale cause
You'll always exist in my heart
Theres just no way that I want
Our souls to be apart

Where are you I continue to
ask the heavens and skies
Unless everything that I
was told was just lies

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Awsome job kiwi I absolutely loved it you described well and it was sinply sweet good job hope to see more!^^

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Originally Posted by Akura13

Awsome job kiwi I absolutely loved it you described well and it was sinply sweet good job hope to see more!^^

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Thanks Akura! It's been a while since I wrote any since I feel like I'm getting old. *Pops here back* At least I know someone who likes it! ^^ Thanks Akura and hope your doing alright! :D:

Please read the September POTM guidelines and make adjustments, this won't qualify for judging otherwise.

K.R.145 you're a true romantic aren't you? your poem was extremely well writen, keep'm coming!!!
4 STARS!!!

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Originally Posted by chiefblackhammer

Please read the September POTM guidelines and make adjustments, this won't qualify for judging otherwise.

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Oh sorry I forgot to add the 9/5/07 didn't I??? Sorry! Sorry! I forgot to add it! Well it's ok if it doesn't get qualified! So yah and sorry again! :D:

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Originally Posted by Lupas

K.R.145 you're a true romantic aren't you? your poem was extremely well writen, keep'm coming!!!
4 STARS!!!

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And thank you for the comment! :D:

aww...another cute poem by kuwi :) nicely done there ^^ :p adorable again xD

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Originally Posted by RayMe

aww...another cute poem by kuwi :) nicely done there ^^ :p adorable again xD

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Thanks Ray! For your comment! I really thank you like the others! :D: