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    My Angel

    Angels continue watching me
    doing my bad and good deeds
    I wonder anyone could just
    Help me with my useless needs

    I've been trouble and it seems
    God hasn't notice at all
    I wonder if anyone could tell
    I've been troubled during this fall

    My guardian angel where are
    You please answer me
    Your that only love I want and
    Your that only to set me free

    I know this is no fairy tale cause
    You'll always exist in my heart
    Theres just no way that I want
    Our souls to be apart

    Where are you I continue to
    ask the heavens and skies
    Unless everything that I
    was told was just lies

    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: My Angel

    Awsome job kiwi I absolutely loved it you described well and it was sinply sweet good job hope to see more!^^



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    Re: My Angel

    Quote Originally Posted by Akura13 View Post
    Awsome job kiwi I absolutely loved it you described well and it was sinply sweet good job hope to see more!^^
    Thanks Akura! It's been a while since I wrote any since I feel like I'm getting old. *Pops here back* At least I know someone who likes it! ^^ Thanks Akura and hope your doing alright!
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    Re: My Angel

    Please read the September POTM guidelines and make adjustments, this won't qualify for judging otherwise.
    Last edited by Chiefblackhammer; Sep 07, 2007 at 12:19 PM.


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    Re: My Angel

    K.R.145 you're a true romantic aren't you? your poem was extremely well writen, keep'm coming!!!
    4 STARS!!!

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    Re: My Angel

    Quote Originally Posted by chiefblackhammer View Post
    Please read the September POTM guidelines and make adjustments, this won't qualify for judging otherwise.
    Oh sorry I forgot to add the 9/5/07 didn't I??? Sorry! Sorry! I forgot to add it! Well it's ok if it doesn't get qualified! So yah and sorry again!

    Quote Originally Posted by Lupas View Post
    K.R.145 you're a true romantic aren't you? your poem was extremely well writen, keep'm coming!!!
    4 STARS!!!
    And thank you for the comment!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: My Angel

    aww...another cute poem by kuwi nicely done there ^^ adorable again xD

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    Re: My Angel

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    aww...another cute poem by kuwi nicely done there ^^ adorable again xD

    Thanks Ray! For your comment! I really thank you like the others!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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