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    Hell Enforcer George Wants Beer Champion, Monkey Cliff Diving Champion, Tilt 2 Champion hellknight may be famous one day hellknight may be famous one day hellknight's Avatar
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    My answer was you

    No matter how many countless days
    Am always falling behind
    There was so many questions
    But, there was no answer I could find

    You were everywhere in my mind
    It's because I always I loved you
    Your words are in my thoughts
    I know you still love me too.

    I stopped looking for questions
    There is nothing I could do
    But, then I closed and opened my eyes
    I found my answer was you.

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    Re: My answer was you

    That was beautiful...I love it, if you ever have any more poems that you want to share please pm them to me I would love to see them!

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    Re: My answer was you

    A few minor things:

    Quote Originally Posted by hellknight View Post
    Am always falling behind
    Is that a typo?

    Also, first stanza, fourth line (and last stanza, third line): there's no comma after but.

    Quote Originally Posted by hellknight View Post
    It's because I always I loved you
    (Instead, what about "It's because I always loved you?" I think that's what you meant . . .)

    Overall, it is a very sweet poem. Well done.

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    Re: My answer was you

    Very sweet poem I liked it. It's so great to have someone who makes all the bad situations seem good.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: My answer was you

    @tora_tora_yatta: I think about it lol and thanks you for awesome comment
    @divine_punishment: Hmmmmmm guess your right, I'll try to keep this in mind and thanks man.
    @cherryblossom18: I love good things happen lol, plus this is the best poem I ever wrote. and thank you for a such a great comment.

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