WOW!!! you like writing poems a lot don't you?
i sure hope this doesn't represent the way you really feel deep inside... and i sure hope this absolutely is not how your real life is. 'coz the picture you're creating in my head and heart aren't that pleasant... in the awry case that it is, then i wish all the best for you. just like how the poem ended.
the message of your peom though clearly abstract becomes concrete with the help of your imagery. it paints a clear picture of where the "i" is both physically, mentally, and emotionally.
i love the way that the poem sews itself together into a dramatic finish which not necessarily means that it is a means of escape, but rather a means of coping.
overall, it is great. to make it better i would like to suggest less use of hifalutin words and less abstractions as to lessen the need of concretizing such things.
i see great potential in you... and i wish to hear more from you... i find it satisfying to be able to read your poems... keep it up. ^^,