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    *my black heart*

    My black heart so cold and deep,
    No one can see the bottom,
    Try and shine a light in my heart adn it wouldn't reach the bottom.

    Not even god's light would even make it,
    I'm already lost and I'm forgotten in this land of the living,
    They don't seem to care if I die or not,
    And only a few family members would notice.

    My friends have left me in this place of ice and rocks so sharp,
    When I try to grap one just to lift myself up
    my hands get cut up,
    And my fingers get frost bites so easy.

    The devil has me by the short hairs and I obey his orders,
    If I don't obey I will be tortured for life and my afterlife.

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    Re: *my black heart*

    man..obeying him is getting tortured already.. :/ sheesh..

    This is a good poem ^^ dark...but i like it..

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    Re: *my black heart*

    Yeah... I agree with RayMe.
    You don't seem to be all that happy obeying the devil. Obey your heart, and maybe it will fill.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: *my black heart*

    Seriously.....you have some talent there!!!
    You can really potray the arkest and deepest emotions of a human being on a paper and that is really tough to do
    Great job!!!
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