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    My Bleeding Heart

    The day you left me

    You left me alone ...............

    Alone to die

    All by myself brocken inside

    You left my heart all scard.....

    And empty

    The pain is just to much........

    To much to bare

    To much to live with

    No were to go

    No one to go to

    You were the one that undrestands me

    But now there is no one that will ever know what iam going throw

    Lost in the world with no help to find my way

    Why did you have to leave
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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    Re: My Bleeding Heart

    Aye, another victim of love eh >_< hope not ^_^
    Good work, just a few spelling mistakes otherwise it's all good. Keep it up ^_^
    But it felt kinda empty...

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    Re: My Bleeding Heart

    ya i know i really cant spell. ya i really need to work at that and thanxs.
    When you walk away
    You don't hear me say please. Oh baby, don't go
    Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight. It's hard to let it go

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