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    My blessing in disguise

    He was a blessing to this heart
    when it became tired.
    i didnt want my heart beating
    nor did i want it to get excited again.

    He currently helps me
    see the sunshine in the rain.
    He is the wings for me
    since mine have been broken again.

    His smiles and laughter
    are my medicine.
    Since my ailment can be complicated.

    He doesn't claim to be my one and only,
    though he made it clear he hopes to be.
    He says he will wait in all honesty,
    and always be there for me.
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    Re: My blessing in disguise (january entry)

    It is a touching piece that appeals to the heart, and says a lot without actually being long or overdone.

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    Re: My blessing in disguise (january entry)

    Again, only 1 entry per member for POTM. Since this is not the first entry it will be moved to the regular poetry forum.
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    Re: My blessing in disguise

    Wow phoenix. This poem is very well said, even though is a tad shoter than you other ones. It has a strong sense of emotion, but yet it is simply said for anyone to understand. As always, your poem are a blast to read ^.^

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