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    my boy


    he's so fine
    i wish he was mine.
    his smile is oh-so bright
    his eyes are a mysterious
    sight
    he can be funny and sweet
    he can be serious and deep.
    i see him from the corner
    of my eye.
    at night i lay on my bed
    and cry.
    i want him to care
    i want him to see
    the kind of difference he has made on me.
    i want to say to him
    "I Love You!"
    but i don't know if he loves me too.
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    ooh sounds like ur in love.lol.Once again i can relate to your poem lol the part
    "but i don't know if he loves me too." except i already know the answer <<

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    ooo, well, does he? and thanks.


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    no lol hes already wit sombody lol but i dont really care no more.again nice work

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    aww...u can find someone better than him! *cheers* thankies again


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    hi! i just started today, but i already love reading ur poems, i can kinda relate as well, that was excellent! two of my favorites that u wrote have got to be 'preteen' and 'sisters' you r a truly excellent poet!!! ^_^
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

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    thankies! have fun in AO!


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    I thought this was a good poem! To be in love with this Guy, you did a good job with it. I enjoied reading it! Keeep up the good work! !

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