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    oOo come on RCP you know Hammer loves you, no need to wonder if I do


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    great poem, personally i love it

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    @The Fighter-thanks 4 being supportive!

    @CBH-U DO???!! i love you!! LOL, j/k.

    @Hitokiri Battousai-thanks.


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    its a great poem.
    goof job,and kee it up.

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    thanks *sweat* i thinkie?


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    wait this sound like me a little, but just in case it's me I love you!!!

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    oi oi? *blush* i love you too


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    Re: my boy

    Quote Originally Posted by royal cutie pain

    he's so fine
    i wish he was mine.
    his smile is so oh-so bright
    his eyes are a mysterious
    sight
    he can be funny and sweet
    he can be serious and deep.
    i see him from the corner
    of my eye.
    at night i lay on my bed
    and cry.
    i want him to care
    i want him to see
    the kind of difference he has made on me.
    i want to say to him
    "I Love You!"
    but i don't know if he loves me too.

    Just my thought but you should take out the first so in so oh-so in the third line. I like the poem though (except the end).

    "People are crazy and times are strange, I'm locked in tight, I'm out of range,
    I used to care, but things have changed..."

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