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    My Breakdown

    I could no longer handle this
    I could no longer deal with this
    Here, in my snow-covered home
    Here, all alone
    In this dull path, I'm desecending
    Is this a dream, am I pretending?

    I could no longer breathe my life
    I no longer see a light
    I'd give it all away just to have a place to go to
    I want someone to come home to
    Broken memories, broken dreams
    What else do I need?

    This is my breakdown, my cries
    This is when a part of me dies
    This is when I run away
    This is when I couldn't stay
    This is when I give up the fight
    This is when I...cry

    Can you hear me screaming?
    Can you see my tears steaming?
    This is my life you are stealing
    No one knew my feelings
    Broken promises, broken dreams
    What else do I need?

    This is my breakdown, my cries
    This is when a part of me dies
    This is when I couldn't sty
    This is when I run away
    This is when I give up the fight
    This is when I...cry

    Can you hear me now?
    Can you see me now?
    This is my breakdown
    I'm about to drown
    Can you hear me now?
    Can you see me now?
    I want a place to go to
    I want someone to come home to
    Can you hear me?
    Can you see me?
    Anybody hear me?
    Anybody see me?!
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: My Breakdown

    I'm not sure how you intend this meaning weather it's a song or poem, but either way it's very emotional! I think you did and awesome job on writing this keep it up!

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    Re: My Breakdown

    It's a song. I was so...sad few days ago and that's how I felt that day. It helps me release stress a lot. =D Glad you liked it.
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: My Breakdown

    eh? a song... but that was a very good poem, i think...
    by the way.. i like it.. very good one. ...some times i feel like that also (haha..i'm not too good at some).
    Last edited by baikuza; Nov 11, 2006 at 09:32 PM.

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    Re: My Breakdown

    yeah it does sound like poem but since they is things repeating, it's a song. writing poems/songs helps me release stress...usually. Anyways, I'm glad you like it and hope that you improve if you try to write poems or songs like that. =D
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