My candy

My Candy

Round... common shape of a candy.
You are bound to see one anywhere.
My candy is non like any others.
It's not like theirs or his or hers.

Holds invisible converging flavours.
Pale and creamy coloured.
Like the moon...
Lulling me deep in my sleep on and on..

An ecstasy that drives me out of control.
An energy source better than petrol.
Tantalizing to touch and feel.
Gentle and shocking like an electric eel.

Changes everytime according to different situation.
My torrent of never ending sugar.
The long river that never stops to flow.
No matter how cold or how hot the suns glow.

Ordinary candy may last for hours,
but mine can still taste the same for years,
decades...
It wont easily fade.

For mine is special and unique,
there is only one of such nick.
The one i call sweety or dear.
One that i will never find here...

so.. :) hows this 1? ^^

this one's sweet^^
it's a really good poem big brother:hattip:
keep up the good work

Thx lil sis ^^ :) i appreciate it ^^ :D im glad u think it's nice ^^

Sure will do ^^ :D promise ya that ^^ i'll try my best

totally awesome dude:laugh:, sorry sometimes i regress. that was incredible, it made me remember my 1st girlfriend. :hattip: thanx rayme it's a really good memory

:laugh::laugh::laugh: That was AWSOME!!! you're really good at poems! specaily Candy ones! :laugh: :p1: And btw it was really sweet.

Awww...candy! :2thumbs:

xD thx Lupas ^^ :D lol ^^ u are welcomed man... *fist shakes lupas* ^^

:p why u guys laughing? xD it's too cute? or..sweet? :D xD ty Zainab ^^ appreciate ur comment.. :) i'll do more ^^

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Originally Posted by RayMe

My Candy

Round... common shape of a candy.
You are bound to see one anywhere.
My candy is non like any others.
It's not like theirs or his or hers.

Holds invisible converging flavours.
Pale and creamy coloured.
Like the moon...
Lulling me deep in my sleep on and on..

An ecstasy that drives me out of control.
An energy source better than petrol.
Tantalizing to touch and feel.
Gentle and shocking like an electric eel.

Changes everytime according to different situation.
My torrent of never ending sugar.
The long river that never stops to flow.
No matter how cold or how hot the suns glow.

Ordinary candy may last for hours,
but mine can still taste the same for years,
decades...
It wont easily fade.

For mine is special and unique,
there is only one of such nick.
The one i call sweety or dear.
One that i will never find here...

so.. :) hows this 1? ^^

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It's really interesting. It's kind of confusing, but then again I'm working on less than two hours' sleep for the past WEEK. I like it.

Oh my gosh, so I am in desperate need of something sweet - have been for the past four hours - and WE HAVE NOTHING SWEET AT ALL IN THE WHOLE BLOODY APARTMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your poem did not help.

xD i know.. :p i try to conceal it as much as possible at first ^^ :p

:/ sorry.. :p *sighs* same here(food) im fasting*sighs*...but i got my sweet dearest~!
:D