Thread: My captive

Its funny.. but every poem I've read today.... I swear, they've all spun me down my own little, painful, memory lane.

This seemed painful to me. Hard to read. Like wittnessing someone who can not shake off that stubborn love. Even though it seems like the feeling has yet to be felt for you in that same stubborn way. It was like looking in the mirror as my own reflection recited the poem to me. And Im on the other side of the mirror... ready to break it.

I am sorry that I lead you down a path of pain. I wrote to releash the pain I was feeling myself.

Well it is emotional..but it breaks my heart at the same time. Good work though. I would love to see more^^

I liked this poem, it was different, never read anything like it before. I liked how you combined love and fear of the love being loss. It was pritty deep.

Thank you Mere. Have you think how easily love comes to some people they have a fear of losing it sometimes.