The concept of the poem is one I can really relate to. For missing a loved one and not being close to them is something that is hard to deal with.
I do really like the Third stanza. The last two lines especially were very well written and caught the atmosphere of the poem really well. It revealed the happiness you shared with your cinderella.
Overall, it is really well written and its consistent all the way through. Well done and I hope to see more of your work, now that you are back.