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    My comfortable prison.

    My thoughts, my thoughts.
    My mind they rape.
    Create a prison,
    I wont escape.

    I'll never see peace.
    Or have a hand to clutch.
    If I care a little...
    ... then I care too much.

    I was easily fooled into believing,
    That making bail would not be hard.
    Tricked by lies, In a clever disguise.
    I was toyed with by the prison gaurd.

    So one night in a sleepless fit....
    I became driven by my own rage.
    I would seek freedom for my soul,
    And, release my mind from its dreary cage.

    Though I broke free from locks and chains...
    My freedom made me feel so small.
    And, all too soon I came to find,
    I'm lost without my prison walls.

    Perhaps this is all an illusion.
    This prison will keep me as long as I live.
    I was never really free.
    My leash just had alot of give.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: My comfortable prison.

    a life does not this prison make that is
    what comes to mind here and its true
    because you could run a million miles
    and still be inprisoned by thoughts and
    people.

    No one is really free those that think
    diferently are in a prison of denial which
    is just as bad if not worse.

    this poem shows that no matter your life style
    or status its a prison just ask anyone who looks
    happy and seems to always have what they want
    its a prison becuase they can loose it all if they stop
    for just a moment.

    this poem is really something to think about
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: My comfortable prison.

    thats a great poem u should take it to ayjw.comand get them copyrights they do ti for u for free
    Rikku's Lover

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    Re: My comfortable prison.

    @ rikku
    Man. sorry for the late response... I didnt realize you had given me this sudgestion, And I wanted to thank you for it!
    ... Not Ever Again...

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