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Reply With QuoteThat acronym is a cute touch. I really liked your poem. You could improve a little but this was really touching. Made me wanna' give you a big hug.
My tears keep falling with nothingness
You look at me with them thats how I ended up in this
Crying won't do nothing
Rage won't do anything
You of course will cause me more disaster
I watch everyone leave me with sorrow
Nothing could stop these tears from falling with borrow
Gentleness won't help me from calling anyone
With hatred on my side I'll be the only one
On the stars on the moon
No where else but the bottom of earth soon
Till that time all I can do is cry
Having nothing will only cause me to lie
Everyone will stare at me with hate
Letting me wait since it's too late
Please no one come to help me or it just cause the same on this state
Thats all. That was a bit too long well to me. This poem was an acrostics poem just to remind you all. Stay happy to all!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
That acronym is a cute touch. I really liked your poem. You could improve a little but this was really touching. Made me wanna' give you a big hug.
Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.
I also liked the acronymn scheme. That's a very creative approach. Keep up the good work! ^_^
I thank you both for your support and comments! I thank you very much!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Yaaay! Very original! Many kudos and hats off to you!
Thats very inovative, im anxious to see what you come up with next.
... Not Ever Again...
hm...nice use of the acronym...but my main focus is that this poem shows a girl crying alone...and doesnt want help, I find this contradicting...I like your poem.
I really thank you all for your comments! You guys are so spport of!! Thanks to all!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
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