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My dark desires
I had a dream that changed my life, I throw away evrything I didn't desire. I am keeping all these desires that I will not give up in my heart. Even if I should fall victim to the chains of death. In the end of dreams and reality, I wont hold back the growing desire to cause (DECEIT), (FEAR), (VANITY) and (DEATH). I'm strong enough to do all of these negative desires. I'm a Mandalorian who doesn't know when to stop!
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Re: My dark desires
Short extremly short. But it doesnt feel like a poem. And yet it is right? So then it was very good. Sound like something I would right I dont really know. But it does sound really good.
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Re: My dark desires
I would've enjoyed it more if it was written in verse... Heck, I'm not even sure if you can still call it a poem without seperate verses. The perspective was pretty interesting, though. First time I've read something about Star Wars.